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Wednesday, October 21, 2015

It Was (100 WC)

The small box opened and la ching was gone it felt like the world was spining and my mind was being crushed into little bits, last thing I saw was the box and then it was gone. Later he got his backpack back and he got his climbing gear, the world felt like nothing was there and he could see nothing too. If he moving his leg his arm would move it was so weird it hurt my brain. He looked up and saw a little bit of sand and then more l wonder what will happen next? The end

1 comment:

  1. Time to consider writing a script for a science fiction programme. You could then submit it to a television producer. Doctor Who always needs great scripts. I enjoy reading your imaginative writing. Keep it up!

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